Snow Freezing both my feet
The Cold, a Raving Beast
The Sun, Tricky Deceit
Wild Geese shouting at me
Bare Trees Surrounding us
In the lake, Ice Debris
Geese Had a strange finesse
The cold bit through my face
And went right through myself
Caught inside Frost's embrace
One could not be himself
The big frozen classroom
Reeks of Icy Perfume
This is my response to Diego's sensory poem.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this poem. It is very descriptive and really brings all of your senses into play using phrases like "the cold bit through my face" and "Reeks of Icy Perfume". While reading this poem the use of descriptive words in this poem helped me picture exactly what kind of a day it was and what you were experiencing. I thought that the adjectives that you chose were very helpful in providing readers with the imagery. Examples of these adjectives are "Raving" and "Icy". Lastly I thought this poem had some nice rhymes which made this poem flow well. Great job!
Shane